I believe this final project has allowed me to revise both “Reading as a Refuge” and “New is Not Always Improved” in the sense that I got to connect and elaborate on both of these ideas in ways that I could not do when originally writing the papers.  Since this piece for me was especially personal, I believe that it helped me to grow as a writer in a way that the previous papers have not.  I was given an outlet to express my personal opinions and I really enjoyed being able to do this.  Since I was writing a paper that I enjoyed, I was able to spend time on it and really get my thoughts out there in a way that I find to be efficient.

Though I feel I have grown as a writer this year, I still feel that there is much more room for improvement.  I know that I still have a problem with transferring my thoughts from my head in a way that I understand them to my projects so that others can effectively understand them as well.  I also believe that I still need work with my writing grammatically in the sense that I am aware that I abuse semicolons and this sometimes causes me to have lengthy, run-on sentences.  I do believe though that my growth in this class has been substantial and I have appreciated this opportunity.

The original tale of “Little Red Riding Hood” communicates the message that young girls should be wary of suitors for they may be interested in them for inappropriate, strictly sexual reasons.  Over time, however, the message became that children should be wary of talking to strangers as it may turn into a dangerous situation.  Neither of these messages is communicated in the electronic text of “Red Riding Hood,” however, because this is a feminist version of “Little Red Riding Hood.”  Feminists believe that the original versions of “Little Red Riding Hood” are degrading to woman because the young girl in the tale is made to seem inadequate to men because she is eaten by the wolf, which is seen to represent the sexual consumption of a woman by a male, and because she cannot escape the wolf without the help of the huntsman.  In many feminist versions of “Little Red Riding Hood,” the girl overcomes the wolf without any help from a man thus proving her strength as a woman.  Even with the knowledge of the feminist view, I could depict no plausible meaning or message from “Red Riding Hood” due to the fact that there are no words written or spoken to explain the ambiguous and confusing scenes.  One example of ambiguity in the hypertext is that the tale has many possible different endings do to the fact that the reader has different pathways that can be chosen throughout the hypertext.  One of the many possible endings of the tale portrays Red (the author’s nickname for Little Red Riding Hood) in the bed of her grandmother with, if the viewer scrolls the mouse over her stomach, a creature that looks like the wolf inside of her.  I use the word creature because it is not clear if the thing inside of her is the wolf himself because she has eaten him or if it is the wolf’s offspring because he has consumed her sexually.  In interpreting feminist views and the sexual connotations of the hypertext, either option can be found extraordinarily plausible which further distorts any interpretable meaning that could have been found.  Meaning of a tale is highly derived from the ending; “Red Riding Hood” has many possible endings, each as ambiguous as the next.

The ending is not the only place where the viewer chooses Red’s path, there are multiple times where the reader must make a choice as to where Red will go or what will happen in her dreams if the viewer has previously chosen to take that pathway.  These choices do not ever lead to a logical story; they instead take the viewer through a maze of bizarre, non-sequential images which appear in a random order every time the hypertext is viewed.  After observing this hypertext, a viewer may be almost dumb-founded as to what exactly they have witnessed.  “The order of print is linear” and this hypertext is anything but linear and therefore it is not a legitimate text (Birkerts 122).  Legitimate text is something that is already written, something that is concrete, something that passes from author to reader (Birkerts, 122).  If the viewer of the text is constantly choosing the direction that the story takes, as does the viewer of “Red Riding Hood,” then essentially he or she has become the author.  If one is the author of the same text that they are viewing, the text cannot be considered concrete because the path of the text is perpetually being altered and thus the text in a unique order each time.  The fact that the images are in a new order each time the hypertext is viewed makes it impossible for the viewer to find a sequential order in which to process them.  Despite the fact that this hypertext has no words, if it was at least in a sequential order it would be much easier to depict meaning because then the viewer would know in what order they are supposed to interpret the images.  In “Red Riding Hood,” “linear sequentiality…[is]…sacrificed” and with the sacrifice comes another: the sacrifice of an interpretable meaning (Birkerts 122).

As previously mentioned, throughout “Red Riding Hood,” the viewer is forced to click on different images or options in order for the story to proceed.  Some may argue that because the viewer must click for the story to progress, the viewer is actively engaged.  I, however, disagree.  In order for a viewer to be actively engaged he or she must be actively thinking and translating “symbols…into their verbal referents… [which are]…in turn interpreted” (Birkerts 122).  Thus, for one to be immersed or engaged in a text one must first be able to comprehend the symbols that the text presents.  Because the “symbols” of “Red Riding Hood” are ever-changing and ambiguous, active engagement as previously defined is impossible because the viewer can never make the transition from symbols to verbal reference and thus cannot interpret the text.  This transition is further hindered by the fact that because “Red Riding Hood” is a hypertext, you cannot go backwards.  In “Red Riding Hood” there is no stop or pause option, there is no rewind; once a scene has played it is impossible to return to the scene without restarting the entire text.  In a legitimate text “the pace of reading is variable, with progress determined by the reader’s focus and comprehension” (Birkerts 122).  In “Red Riding Hood” the scene will continue whether you are actually paying attention or not.  It is true that the next scene will not begin without your cue but just because that cue is given, does not mean that the previous scenes have been comprehended.  There were multiple times in my reading of the text when I only proceeded to the next scene in hopes that it would reveal the meaning of the text; there were also times when I only proceeded because there was no other option.

Mankind’s constant thirst for knowledge and technological advancement has placed our species in an eternally changing world, but is advancement always positive?  “Transitions like the one from print to electronic media do not take place without…reweaving the entire social and cultural web” and this sort of reweaving is anything but positive.  Through this transition mankind is losing legitimate pieces of text that once lost, may never be retrieved.    These pieces are important both in our past and in our future, for they are what keep us tied to the material world.  How far will technology go before all materiality is lost?

When I was a child, almost every summer my mother would take my sister and me to the library to join the “Sneaks” summer reading program.  This program did not entail much, but my mother pushed my sister and me to read at least one book a week.  At first I was resistant to this reading; I wanted to play outside in my imaginary land that only a young child could create.  Soon though, I discovered that I could be just as imaginative if not more so, in the land of literature.  My favorite books were the books of the Goosebumps series by R.L. Stine, which were exciting tales of aliens, mummies, and the like; these books proved to be my greatest escape as a child.  You may not think that a child needs much of an escape because they are so young and carefree, but when I was a child my family was plagued with cancer; both my grandmother and my mother suffered from the disease within the time that I was in elementary school.  While other children could still easily make their own imaginative lands right out of their heads, my imagination was drowning in images of hospitals, doctors and death. Goosebumps for me was almost like a template, something I could use to re-create the imagination that, in those days, for me was hard to find.  This time for me was the time that “my sense of books as a refuge” developed the most; this sense is identical to the way Birkerts originally felt towards books (Birkerts 35).              

I was in about eighth grade when I discovered the book Sloppy Firsts by Megan McCafferty.  This was a book about a young high school girl who was surprisingly sarcastic and somewhat of an outsider; in other words, in my mind at least, she was a mirror image of me.  In all of my experiences of reading, I had and still have not ever felt a stronger connection with any character.  The character of Jessica Darling was my written twin and as I followed her through crushes, first kisses and school rumors, I grew closer and closer to her.  Luckily for me, there were four succeeding books so I have gotten to grow up most of my life with a character that I can identify with more than I can with most real people that I have ever met.  Megan McCafferty changed my view of books forever, not only do I love books more, but I now know that there are characters in literature with whom I can truly identify.  Despite the fact that this series was so similar to my life, it still proved useful as a place of refuge.  For the time that I was immersed in these books, I would completely forget about my own life in which there was constantly hurtful rumors and drama circulating, which was the typical life of any adolescent girl.  These novels though served an extra purpose because when I was finished I could compare my life with Jessica’s and sometimes even help myself through the common problems and hurtful situations any adolescent girl is faced with daily.

There is also another series that deeply affected my life, one which proved to be the biggest escape from the real world that I have ever found: the Harry Potter series by J.K Rowling.  I am well aware that this series has no real literary merit, but I do not believe that literary merit is what defines a book as excellent or otherwise.  I first began to read Harry Potter and the Sorcerer’s Stone when I was in second grade and I was immediately entranced by the magic and the witty characters; however, like most elementary students I stopped reading the books as they became too heavy for me to carry.  Looking back I do not regret this decision because I know now that I did not truly appreciate the books for what they were; if I had kept reading them then, I may not have developed the deep connection that I have with the series today.  I began reading Harry Potter again when I was beginning high school, which for me was an immense adjustment.  I had been separated from many friends that I had been with since kindergarten and thrown into a new place with new teachers, a new layout and a new schedule; I needed very much to escape from the real world.  What better way to escape from the real world than to turn to an imaginative world of witchcraft and wizardry?  In my opinion, there is none; I still can get so caught up in those books that I dream about magic for nights.

When I read books, I read them as Birkerts once did, with “body and soul, living vicariously;” not as he reads now “with only one part of the self” (Birkerts 37). I absolutely prefer my method of reading; it allows me to leave the world and my problems behind, if only even for a few minutes, and fully submerge myself into the many different worlds of literature.  Be it zombies and ghouls, potions and wizards, or even the realistic life of Jessica Darling; as long as it is not my own life, it allows me to escape.  Birkerts now reads to “grasp the fine points of technique and heed the structural signs,” but I wonder what exactly the point of this is (Birkerts 45).  Is it so that you can sit there and just be proud of yourself that you understand how the author writes?  I find this way of reading to be over-analytical and stressful.  Books to me are stress relievers, the escape that they provide is immeasurable and I would not have it any other way.

Using reading as an escape, however, has become more and more difficult as our society has shifted “from the patterns and habits of the printed page…[to]…a new world distinguished by its reliance on electronic communications” (Birkerts 118).  This shift has irrevocably changed not only the way that printed books are viewed but also the way in which they are read.  Because any knowledge imaginable can be found on the internet in a short-hand, tightly summarized version, people are taking the “easy way out” and either foregoing the reading process partially by only skimming for information or foregoing the process entirely.  This new method of reading has completely destroyed any possibility of newer generations reading for a refuge because why in this fast paced world would they read something that can be found summarized on the internet?  Even younger generations are now being taught to find information on the internet; this is especially problematic because without the initial introduction to the printed page, how will children know the glories and benefits that it holds?  Without this knowledge, children and therefore succeeding generations will never know the refuge of reading.  It may already be obvious but to make it clear, yes, I am implying that no refuge can be found in the reading of online texts.  Online texts are perpetually changing, the pace is uncontrollable, and deciphering meaning from them proves to be difficulty; because of these aspects of online texts, especially the online text “Red Riding Hood,” online texts are not now and will not ever be capable of providing the refuge that printed texts can.

Printed texts, which from here on out will be referred to as books (yes I know “books” are online, I do not however consider them genuine books), are already written.  The pages are concrete objects that you can hold and the story that they portray cannot be changed.  Online texts, however, are quite the opposite.  In online texts such as “Red Riding Hood,” the reader is presented with many decisions to make in regard to what path the text will take.  Each of these decisions affects the order of the tale and eventually the message that it portrays.  One significant choice of the tale is when Red (the author’s nickname for Little Red Riding Hood) falls asleep in the flowers on the way to her Grandmother’s house; the reader must chose either to let Red sleep and dream or to wake her up.  If Red is made to wake up, she continues on to her Grandmother’s house where she eventually meets the wolf and some form of what I can only assume to be the huntsman.  On the other hand, if Red is allowed to sleep, you are taken through her strange dreamland which is a plethora of bizarre and non-sequential images.  Regardless of the path that is taken, the text changes with each decision that is made.  “The order of print is linear” and this hypertext and many others are anything but linear; links and a variety of choices throughout these texts distort any linearity that may possible be present (Birkerts 122).  Linearity is one of the main aspects of text that allows the reader to be taken away out of his or her surroundings.  Linearity allows the reader to follow a text almost blindly as he or she imagines the alternate world that is being presented; it is this alternate world that is serving as a place of refuge.  If a reader is forced to make decisions about where their path of reading is going then essentially he or she has become the author and because of this cannot be swept away by the text.

Another aspect that is of utmost importance in being able to use reading as a refuge is pace.  “The pace of reading is variable, with the progress determined by the reader’s focus and comprehension” (Birkerts 122).  Conversely in online texts like “Red Riding Hood,” “the pace is rapid, driven by the jump-cut increments” and not controlled in the slightest by the reader (Birkerts 122).   In “Red Riding Hood” there is no stop or pause option, there is no rewind; once a scene has played it is impossible to return to the scene without restarting the entire text.  This can cause a variety of problems in comprehension.  In order for one to use reading as a refuge, the reading must be completely understood.  In “Red Riding Hood” this is nearly impossible because the scene will continue at its own predetermined pace whether the viewer has comprehended it completely it or not.  It is true that the next scene will not begin without your cue but just because that cue is given, does not mean that the previous scenes have been comprehended.  Without full comprehension of a text, a connection between text and reader is difficult to form.   I find the connection that I made to the Meagan McCafferty book Sloppy Firsts to be one of the strongest connections that I have ever made with a book.   This was a book about a young high school girl who was surprisingly sarcastic and somewhat of an outsider; in other words, in my mind at least, she was a mirror image of me.  In all of my experiences of reading, I had and still have not ever felt a stronger connection with any character.  The character of Jessica Darling was my written twin and as I followed her through crushes, first kisses and school rumors, I grew closer and closer to her.  Luckily for me, there were four succeeding books so I have gotten to grow up most of my life with a character that I can identify with more than I can with most real people that I have ever met.  Megan McCafferty changed my view of books forever, not only do I love books more, but I now know that there are characters in literature with whom I can truly identify.  Without having been able to first comprehend Jessica’s story however, there would have been no way that I could have ever forged such a strong connection with her.  If I had been forced through this book like I would have been an online text, I would have never been able to understand her wide vocabulary and witty language.  Me being allowed to set my own pace and re-read paragraphs or even whole pages if I needed allowed me to understand the book and thus make a connection to the characters.  This connection is what allowed me to become immersed in this book thus using it as a refuge from the real world.

As previously discussed, as Birkerts grew older, his style of reading changed and he now reads to “grasp the fine points of technique and heed the structural signs” (Birkerts 45).  I believe that this is the type of reading that is necessary in order to decipher meaning from online texts and I also believe that this type of reading is over-analytical and stressful.  This type of reading is not capable of proving refuge because if one is expending all of their time trying to decipher and analyze the meaning of the text then one cannot become immersed in the book and taken away by their imagination.  Throughout my entire life, books have helped to take me away from the real world and into the fictional land that only books can create; this proved to be especially true for me when I was a child.  When I was a child, my favorite books were the books of the Goosebumps series by R.L. Stine, which were exciting tales of aliens, mummies, and the like; these books proved to be my greatest escape as a child.  You may not think that a child needs much of an escape because a child’s life is so carefree, but when I was a child my family was plagued with cancer; both my grandmother and my mother suffered from the disease within the time that I was in elementary school.  While other children could still easily make their own imaginative lands right out of their heads, my imagination was drowning in images of hospitals, doctors and death. Goosebumps for me was almost like a template, something I could use to re-create the imagination that, in those days, for me was hard to find.  This time for me was the time that “my sense of books as a refuge” developed the most; this sense is identical to the way Birkerts originally felt towards books (Birkerts 35).

Mankind’s constant thirst for knowledge and technological advancement has placed our species in an eternally changing world, but is advancement always positive?  “Transitions like the one from print to electronic media do not take place without rippling or, more likely, reweaving the entire social and cultural web” and this sort of reweaving is anything but positive (Birkerts 123).  This reweaving is already taken place within the way that Birkerts himself reads.  Birkerts once read with “body and soul, living vicariously;” and has admitted to now reading “with only one part of the self” (Birkerts 37).  I still read as Birkerts once did by throwing myself entirely into a book and becoming one with the fictional tales that it holds.  I absolutely prefer my method of reading; it allows me to leave the world and my problems behind, if only even for a few minutes, and fully submerge myself into the many different worlds of literature.  Birkerts now reads to “grasp the fine points of technique and heed the structural signs,” but I wonder what exactly the point of this is (Birkerts 45).  This type of reading is stressful and in my mind pointless, I do not really care how a book was put together grammatically I just care about the story it holds.  When reading online, I feel like you have to pick the story apart as Birkerts now tends to do with books in order to gain any meaning and in this process, the story itself may be lost.  Online texts are much more difficult to decipher meaning from due to the fact that they are perpetually changing and have a predetermined pace.  This difficulty does not allow one to find refuge and because of this I am caused to wonder, why is our society letting books be replaced by this online material?  The answer to that question is one that I may never fully come to grasp.

The original tale of “Little Red Riding Hood” communicates the message that young girls should be wary of suitors for they may be interested in them for inappropriate, strictly sexual reasons.  Over time, however, the message became that children should be wary of talking to strangers as it may turn into a dangerous situation.  Neither of these messages is communicated in the electronic text of “Red Riding Hood,” however, because this is a feminist version of “Little Red Riding Hood.”  Feminists believe that the original versions of “Little Red Riding Hood” are degrading to woman because the young girl in the tale is made to seem inadequate to men because she is eaten by the wolf, which is seen to represent the sexual consumption of a woman by a male, and because she cannot escape the wolf without the help of the huntsman.  In many feminist versions of “Little Red Riding Hood,” the girl overcomes the wolf without any help from a man thus proving her strength as a woman.  Even with the knowledge of the feminist view, I could depict no plausible meaning or message from “Red Riding Hood” due to the fact that there are no words written or spoken to explain the ambiguous and confusing scenes.  One example of ambiguity in the hypertext is that the tale has many possible different endings do to the fact that the reader has different pathways that can be chosen throughout the hypertext.  One of the many possible endings of the tale portrays Red (the author’s nickname for Little Red Riding Hood) in the bed of her grandmother with, if the viewer scrolls the mouse over her stomach, a creature that looks like the wolf inside of her.  I use the word creature because it is not clear if the thing inside of her is the wolf himself because she has eaten him or if it is the wolf’s offspring because he has consumed her sexually.  In interpreting feminist views and the sexual connotations of the hypertext, either option can be found extraordinarily plausible which further distorts any interpretable meaning that could have been found.  Meaning of a tale is highly derived from the ending; “Red Riding Hood” has many possible endings, each as ambiguous as the next.

The ending is not the only place where the viewer chooses Red’s path, there are multiple times where the reader must make a choice as to where Red will go or what will happen in her dreams if the viewer has previously chosen to take that pathway.  These choices do not ever lead to a logical story; they instead take the viewer through a maze of bizarre, non-sequential images which appear in a random order every time the hypertext is viewed.  After observing this hypertext, a viewer may be almost dumb-founded as to what exactly they have witnessed.  “The order of print is linear” and this hypertext is anything but linear and therefore it is not a legitimate text (Birkerts 122).  Legitimate text is something that is already written, something that is concrete, something that passes from author to reader (Birkerts, 122).  If the viewer of the text is constantly choosing the direction that the story takes, as does the viewer of “Red Riding Hood,” then essentially he or she has become the author.  If one is the author of the same text that they are viewing, the text cannot be considered concrete because the path of the text is perpetually being altered and thus the text in a unique order each time.  The fact that the images are in a new order each time the hypertext is viewed makes it impossible for the viewer to find a sequential order in which to process them.  Despite the fact that this hypertext has no words, if it was at least in a sequential order it would be much easier to depict meaning because then the viewer would know in what order they are supposed to interpret the images.  In “Red Riding Hood,” “linear sequentiality…[is]…sacrificed” and with the sacrifice comes another: the sacrifice of an interpretable meaning (Birkerts 122).

As previously mentioned, throughout “Red Riding Hood,” the viewer is forced to click on different images or options in order for the story to proceed.  Some may argue that because the viewer must click for the story to progress, the viewer is actively engaged.  I, however, disagree.  In order for a viewer to be actively engaged he or she must be actively thinking and translating “symbols…into their verbal referents… [which are]…in turn interpreted” (Birkerts 122).  Thus, for one to be immersed or engaged in a text one must first be able to comprehend the symbols that the text presents.  Because the “symbols” of “Red Riding Hood” are ever-changing and ambiguous, active engagement as previously defined is impossible because the viewer can never make the transition from symbols to verbal reference and thus cannot interpret the text.  This transition is further hindered by the fact that because “Red Riding Hood” is a hypertext, you cannot go backwards.  In “Red Riding Hood” there is no stop or pause option, there is no rewind; once a scene has played it is impossible to return to the scene without restarting the entire text.  In a legitimate text “the pace of reading is variable, with progress determined by the reader’s focus and comprehension” (Birkerts 122).  In “Red Riding Hood” the scene will continue whether you are actually paying attention or not.  It is true that the next scene will not begin without your cue but just because that cue is given, does not mean that the previous scenes have been comprehended.  There were multiple times in my reading of the text when I only proceeded to the next scene in hopes that it would reveal the meaning of the text; there were also times when I only proceeded because there was no other option.

Mankind’s constant thirst for knowledge and technological advancement has placed our species in an eternally changing world, but is advancement always positive?  “Transitions like the one from print to electronic media do not take place without…reweaving the entire social and cultural web” and this sort of reweaving is anything but positive.  Through this transition mankind is losing legitimate pieces of text that once lost, may never be retrieved.    These pieces are important both in our past and in our future, for they are what keep us tied to the material world.  How far will technology go before all materiality is lost?

The original tale of “Red Riding Hood” communicates the message that young girls should be wary of suitors for they may be interested in them for the wrong reasons. Over time, however, the message became that children should be wary of talking to strangers. Neither of these messages is communicated in the electronic text of “Red Riding Hood.” In the hypertext, there are no words spoken or written and because of this, the scenes are very hard to follow. This version of “Red Riding Hood” is a feminist version and therefore the tale is much different from the original. Even after multiple viewings and research on feminists’ views of “Little Red Riding Hood,” I could still not depict any type of message or plausible storyline. My lack of interpretation though may also stem from the fact that there are many pathways that can be taken throughout the hypertext.

In the hypertext, there are multiple times where the reader must make a choice as to where Red (the author’s nickname for Little Red Riding Hood) will go or what will happen in her dreams if the viewer has chosen to take that pathway. These choices do not ever lead to a logical story; they instead take the viewer through a maze of random, non-sequential images that I have found to make no sense at all. After viewing this hypertext, a viewer may be almost dumb-founded as to what exactly they have witnessed. For me, even after several viewings, I still have no idea what happened or why in this hypertext and I do not believe I will ever find out. I am very aware that there are many books in this world that are just as, and possible more, mindboggling than this hypertext. The difference, however, is that in books, at least the reader is aware as to what order they are supposed to interpret the information and that detail may help the reader to eventually depict a meaning from the text. The hypertext “Red Riding Hood” takes the viewer in a different direction every time that it is viewed and therefore makes it all the more difficult to depict any meaning.

The electronic text, “Red Riding Hood” is a feminist version of this everlasting fable which renews the old morality and sexuality of the original tale as well as giving females back the ability to survive independently of and even overcome men. I find this view of the story to be very intriguing because I have never heard much of these opinions, as I have narrow-mindedly dismissed them as over-analyses of a classic tale. After researching the topic, however, I have found that these ideas are not in the least bit far-fetched but actually very plausible. This version in particular, though still extremely confusing and odd to me, gives a very interesting spin on the classic tale.

In this electronic text, Red, as she is referred to, takes on a new look losing her “riding hood” and gaining a pair of pants; clearly displaying that she is equal to men in the sense that she too “can wear the pants.” As she walks along to her grandmother’s house (one can only assume that is where she is going by knowledge of the original tale because in this one there is no dialogue) the “wolf,” or in this case a boy about the same age as Red, begins to follow her and at one point while she is looking at him, he licks his lips at her. This part of the story alludes to the sexual connotations and morale of the original tale; which is that females need be weary of inappropriate male suitors who are only after them to fulfill their sexual desires. True to feminist beliefs, Red ignores the boy and proceeds to her Grandmother’s house.

After that section of the tale, things get to be extremely strange and confusing. Red falls asleep in a bed of flowers and the “reader” gets to choose whether she dreams or awakes. I am not at all going to get into her dreaming yet because that version takes you through a different stream of extremely bizarre dreams every time and I have not even begun to depict any meaning from them. The version in which you wake her is still almost equally confusing but I believe I am much closer to understanding it. When Red arrives to her grandmother’s house, the “wolf” is in her grandmother’s bed and there is an exchange of angry looks. Following this scene there is one where Red is in bed with a distended stomach and when you scroll over it, there is a mini version of the “wolf” inside. As she is sleeping, however, a man, who I can only assume to be the hunter who saves Red in the modern Red Riding Hood tales, comes and points a gun at her head. Classic feminist beliefs would cause me to believe that Red ate the “wolf” instead of him eating her and the hunter wants to shoot her because he is a man and does not like a woman with power. However, I do not believe that she at the “wolf” I believe that she is pregnant with his child and I do not really have any reason for this other than the fact that the original tale had sexual connotations of rape and sex so maybe this one does too.

I still have much meaning to derive from this text but for now I am only left with a plethora of questions. Is Red pregnant or did she eat the wolf? If she is pregnant, was the sex consensual or was it rape? Is the man with the gun really the hunter and why does he even want to shoot her? And finally, what do those bizarre dreams mean?

When thinking of the concept of invisibility, one does not necessarily think of the process of becoming so.  In the scene in “Hollowman” where Sebastian becomes invisible, this process is given a very interesting, yet scientific twist.  The process of becoming invisible in “Hollowman” is just that, it is a process; it is not automatic.  As Sebastian becomes invisible, he becomes invisible layer by layer.  First his skin becomes invisible, then his muscles, followed by his nerves, and finally his bones (Hollowman).  As a result of this process, the viewer is shown the different layers of human anatomy, all the time wondering: is this what I look like on the inside?  At first, one does not realize the connection between this thought and the message of the movie but after a slow reading, the message is clear.  In relating himself/herself, a human being, to Sebastian as he is becoming invisible, the viewer proves that although invisible, Sebastian is still a human being.  He has not become a superhero or a monster.  He is still human. In showing the different layers of the inside of Sebastian’s body, the viewer is reminded that they too have the same parts that he does and therefore Sebastian, like us viewers, is still completely human.

Like Sebastian, the Creature’s appearance is very different from that of a “normal” human being.  Granted, the Creature was not created in a natural way but he has a heart, brain and an advanced thought process, so by definition, he is a human being.  As Sebastian’s human characteristics are seen through the process of him becoming invisible, the Creature’s human characteristics can be seen through his narrative when he spends time watching and helping the family in the woods (Shelley).  Both of these portrayals are necessary in order for the viewer to obtain the underlying message of both “Hollowman” and Frankenstein of the Creature being more human than the creator.  Without first seeing the human characteristics that both the Creature and Sebastian, once turned invisible, possess, it would be impossible for this message to be conveyed.

In “Hollowman,” one of the severe side effects of being invisible is that you feel very intense emotions, emotions that are uncontrollable; if while invisible one feels rage, lust, sadness, or otherwise, the feeling cannot be contained or controlled and therefore it is acted upon.  One night when Sebastian is at home, he sees through the window of his neighbor that she has just gotten out of the shower and is naked.  Sebastian then feels such a lust towards her that he goes over to her apartment, invisibly, and rapes her.  This reminds me of the Creature in Frankenstein because like the Creature, Sebastian is experiencing more human emotion than his creator.  These emotions, however, are quite different.  In Frankenstein, the Creature feels the same amount of emotion as a human feels while Frankenstein feels little for his creation at all; while in “Hollowman” the creators, or other scientists, feel relatively strong emotions towards Sebastian while Sebastian feels intensified emotions.  These concepts are slightly different, but the message of “the creature being more human that the creator” is still relatively strong.

This scene is also interesting in terms of film because of the way that the scene is shot.  This interesting shooting begins when Sebastian first sees the woman through her window.  The scene is filmed so that you see a view of the city surrounding the window along with the window of the woman’s apartment; this gives the illusion that the viewer is watching her through another sort of movie screen.  For the continuation of the scene, the viewer sees through “Sebastian’s eyes” in that the scene is an eye-level-shot from his point of view.  This causes the viewer to actually feel as though you are him, which is actually a terrifying feeling because you can sense that he is about to rape her.  The rape in itself is not shown; however, a reaction shot of the woman when he pushes her down is shown and it is obvious what is going to happen.  The way that the viewer sees these events heightens the fear that is felt of this scene because it puts you into the eyes, and because of this the mind, of a rapist and that is not at all a comfortable position.

As human beings, we never quite take the time to decipher what it means to be “human,” we just know that we are; however, what if a critical change was to take place within our species?  What if we suddenly were all twenty feet tall? What if we had three legs? What if we were actually invisible? Would we still be human?  My answer to this question is yes and that is why I believe both the Creature and Sebastian, despite their physical appearance or means of creation, are very human.  I believe that being human is not about your physical appearance but your capacity for thought and emotion, and that is why I believe that both the Creature and Sebastian are much more human than their creators.

The idea from Frankenstein of “the creature being more human than the creator” is especially prominent in “Hollowman.” One of the severe side effects of being invisible is that you feel very intense emotions, emotions that are uncontrollable; if while invisible one feels rage, lust, sadness, or otherwise, the feeling cannot be contained or controlled and therefore it is acted upon. One night when Sebastian is at home, he sees through the window of his neighbor that she has just gotten out of the shower and is naked. Sebastian then feels such a lust towards her that he goes over to her apartment, invisibly, and rapes her. This reminds me of the Creature in Frankenstein because like the Creature, Sebastian is experiencing more human emotion than his creator. These emotions, however, are quite different. In Frankenstein, the Creature feels the same amount of emotion as a human feels while Frankenstein feels little for his creation at all; while in “Hollowman” the creators, or other scientists, feel relatively strong emotions towards Sebastian while Sebastian feels intensified emotions. These concepts are slightly different, but the message of “the creature being more human that the creator” is still relatively strong.

This scene is also interesting in terms of film because of the way that the scene is shot. This interesting shooting begins when Sebastian first sees the woman through her window. The scene is filmed so that you see a view of the city surrounding the window along with the window of the woman’s apartment; this gives the illusion that the viewer is watching her through another sort of movie screen. For the continuation of the scene, the viewer sees through “Sebastian’s eyes” in that the scene is an eye-level-shot from his point of view. This causes the viewer to actually feel as though you are him, which is actually a terrifying feeling because you can sense that he is about to rape her. The rape in itself is not shown; however, a reaction shot of the woman when he pushes her down is shown and it is obvious what is going to happen. The way that the viewer sees these events heightens the fear that is felt of this scene because it puts you into the eyes, and because of this the mind, of a rapist and that is not at all a comfortable position.

 Before I begin to explain the meaning of Mutability in Frankenstein, I would like to take a step back and instead examine the placement. The placement of the poem Mutability is essential in revealing the full message of Marry Shelley.  Mutability appears in Frankenstein after Victor has returned home due to the death of his younger brother William; because of his distress and guilt, he turns to nature for consolation.  In his exposure to nature, Victor is filled with “sublime ecstasy” and expresses how “we are moved by every wind that blows” (M. Shelly, 92).  These emotions and expressions give an insight as to how powerful nature is over the human mind and body.  Victor was so moved by the view in front of him, that he completely forgot the woes he had caused for himself and for others, and was moved to believe that nature has a controlling ability over human behavior.  Directly after these realizations, the last two stanzas of Mutability appear in Frankenstein.  These two stanzas are about the insignificance of human life compared to the surrounding world.   No matter what condition a human is in, “be it joy or sorrow”, the world around us still continues to be and thus we are insignificant (Mutability, P. Shelley).  If Mutability had been placed in a part of the novel where Victor had not just made these realizations, the message of the book may have been lost.

Only the last two stanzas of Mutability are present in Frankenstein but the poem as a whole conveys that human life is fragile and insignificant.  In the first stanza, humans are compared to “clouds that veil the midnight moon…yet soon night closes round, and they are lost forever” (P. Shelley).  Like the night clouds whose existence is fleeting, the lives of Frankenstein’s brother William, and his friend Justine are also short-lived and therefore the two can be easily related.  Human existence, like a cloud, is fleeting and forever changing, and what is present today may not be present tomorrow.  In the second stanza human life is compared to a musical instrument “whose fragile frame no second motion brings one mood or modulation like the last” (P. Shelley). The instruments production of a random sound instead of an intended one is analogous to the volatility of human life; as humans we do not have the ability to make things happen the way that we wish. This concept relates to Victor’s making of the Creature.  While Victor is in the process of making the Creature, he does not think much about the outcome; he only considers proving his scientific ability.  One can only assume, however, that he was not intending to make a being that would murder his family.     

The poems and quotes that are strategically placed throughout the chapters of Frankenstein are easily passed over; however doing so can jeopardize finding the true meaning of this complex novel.  Without having read the poem Mutability for example one may miss Mary Shelley’s message that human life is fragile and insignificant in comparison to the rest of the world.  Many may believe that Mary Shelley only included this poem to advertise one of her husband’s less well known works; I believe though that this poem the hidden element that brings the novel’s message to the surface.

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The drafting/editing process of this paper was something that was difficult for me.  I had a harder time than normal getting my thoughts from my head onto my paper and I feel that this was due to the complexity of both the poem I chose and the novel itself.